Khaadijah
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Hello everyone! I am posting a poem from a collection I have submitted for publication. I was hoping that you might offer feedback on this one poem. If you are interested in reading more, just pm or email me. Thank you so much you guys!
*much love* -Emily
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To the Knight of Infinite Resignation
(I am the Knight of Faith)**
Oh knight, where is your faithful steed
and the maiden fair, that cries for freedom?
I see your armor has rusted, Excalibur lost,
and the crusade seems forever gone.
Your heart aches and in some distance; forced,
you make a futile effort to arm against assault.
Burning stars paint the oblivion
and light the eyes of seekers.
Souls older than time remember the saga of love,
yet they ne'er cease their sacrifice upon the altar.
I see you dreaming in black and white
as colored tears escape your eyes.
Give me your trust, oh broken Galahad,
here is your damsel come to slay the dragons and
conquer your demons.
The day's light shines into lonely night
and the beacon of hope is not long away.
Rise sir, restored one day, thus the sharp thorns
and poisoned miasma retreat from your heart.
The day is won with every step and no feats of valor;
the Lake stirs, will you see?
**this title's terms are referenced to Kierkegaard's FEAR AND TREMBLING. The poem is not meant to be about the subjects of that thesis but does draw on their concept.
*much love* -Emily
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To the Knight of Infinite Resignation
(I am the Knight of Faith)**
Oh knight, where is your faithful steed
and the maiden fair, that cries for freedom?
I see your armor has rusted, Excalibur lost,
and the crusade seems forever gone.
Your heart aches and in some distance; forced,
you make a futile effort to arm against assault.
Burning stars paint the oblivion
and light the eyes of seekers.
Souls older than time remember the saga of love,
yet they ne'er cease their sacrifice upon the altar.
I see you dreaming in black and white
as colored tears escape your eyes.
Give me your trust, oh broken Galahad,
here is your damsel come to slay the dragons and
conquer your demons.
The day's light shines into lonely night
and the beacon of hope is not long away.
Rise sir, restored one day, thus the sharp thorns
and poisoned miasma retreat from your heart.
The day is won with every step and no feats of valor;
the Lake stirs, will you see?
**this title's terms are referenced to Kierkegaard's FEAR AND TREMBLING. The poem is not meant to be about the subjects of that thesis but does draw on their concept.