Pantzike
Expert
I understand that to save space racial blurbs have been condensed. Is it too late to expand a couple?
Specifically:
Finally, including a bit more detail in age ranges could be useful as it's very nebulous with the exception of High Ogres.
Specifically:
- Including Biata Feather Colors
- Dwarf says "They craft the most effective weapons, cut the brightest gems and stones, weave the most durable cloth, and brew the strongest ale." Consider changing to "They feel they craft the..." or is this stating a new world fact?
- Stone Elves mention Rationality but don't mention Emotional Control Roleplay Restrictions which have previously existed (are they now relaxed?). Does not mention their mental abilities being Emotional based.
- Sylvanborn has no mention of dislike of Slavery / Commands (Has this been relaxed?). This has been their signature similar to Ogres and dislike of Necromancy (which is mentioned)
Finally, including a bit more detail in age ranges could be useful as it's very nebulous with the exception of High Ogres.